Developing film ideas.
No longer following the object, but the camping trip/ tent will still be incorporated. Complex structure/ narrative. Which follows one persons story from different angles, one is told by a voiceover, the other by writing in a journal, to start with, both of these do not match, but they meet in the middle eventually.
Someone parks on top of a multi story car park at night time, and notices an open tent with nobody inside, he heads in and shuts the tent after him as he starts to inspect what is inside. He then opens the tent up slightly to make sure no one saw him, and its day time, light is peering through the tent, he rushes to open the tent and jumps out of it, realising he is on the same multi story car park, but it is a bright, sunny day. Realising what he has discovered, he tries to ring his friends but with no answer.
Then it cuts to the other side of the story, with the same person but at the end of the quest, realising he is safe and making the final voiceover. At first this doesn't make sense, but as the story develops the voice over and journal begin to match, and eventually exactly what is being written down is said in the voiceover, and as the one character finishes writing, he steps out the tent, and sees another version of himself in front, speaking the voice over.
The middle scenes show the characters journey, and how he gets to the point shown in the second scene, many notes are left for him from the person he doesn't know he is after. These notes are shown being left by the person travelling back in time, which is hopefuly how the audience realise they are two different people.
No longer following the object, but the camping trip/ tent will still be incorporated. Complex structure/ narrative. Which follows one persons story from different angles, one is told by a voiceover, the other by writing in a journal, to start with, both of these do not match, but they meet in the middle eventually.
Someone parks on top of a multi story car park at night time, and notices an open tent with nobody inside, he heads in and shuts the tent after him as he starts to inspect what is inside. He then opens the tent up slightly to make sure no one saw him, and its day time, light is peering through the tent, he rushes to open the tent and jumps out of it, realising he is on the same multi story car park, but it is a bright, sunny day. Realising what he has discovered, he tries to ring his friends but with no answer.
Then it cuts to the other side of the story, with the same person but at the end of the quest, realising he is safe and making the final voiceover. At first this doesn't make sense, but as the story develops the voice over and journal begin to match, and eventually exactly what is being written down is said in the voiceover, and as the one character finishes writing, he steps out the tent, and sees another version of himself in front, speaking the voice over.
The middle scenes show the characters journey, and how he gets to the point shown in the second scene, many notes are left for him from the person he doesn't know he is after. These notes are shown being left by the person travelling back in time, which is hopefuly how the audience realise they are two different people.
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